Rivet Your Readers with Deep Point of View by Jill Elizabeth Nelson is a keep-within-reach (not just a shelf-keeper) handbook that clearly shares and better explains the information I shared in my Kathy Writes Books Steping Out of the Way post.
The Amazon Book Description reads:
"Dear Novelist: Would you like your readers to live your stories, not
merely read them? Deep Point of View anchors your readers inside the
point of view character(s) of your novel. This handbook shows you how to
perform the transformation from ordinary narrative to deep narrative in
clear, easy-to-master steps. I invite you to sweep your writing to the
next level with a technique that creates immediacy and intimacy with
your readers and virtually eliminates show/don't tell issues. My Best to
This is one of those writing resources I wish I'd had access to years ago, however, since both the paper copy and digital version only became available earlier this year, the book is a welcome addition to my learning process. I highly recommend Rivet Your Readers with Deep Point of View!